| When | Change | Evidence | Session |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2026-10-20 | Secure → Secure | 20 Oct timed: 0 comma splices in 6 sentences. Also, in her story passage at 13:00 she turned the black-suit comma into a full stop and capital after the tutor said a comma sat where a full stop belonged: supported fix, not unaided. | session 122 |
| 2026-10-06 | Secure → Secure | 6 Oct timed handwritten, ~133 words: 0 comma splices, third clean timed piece running (15 Sep, 22 Sep). Her single-target check ('after how many commas does a whole new sentence start?') reported 0, verified 0. Nothing was present to catch. | session 78 |
| 2026-09-22 | Developing → Secure | 22 Sep timed handwritten piece, ~155 words: 0 comma splices; her two-target check reported 0, verified 0. Second clean timed piece on a different task in a different session (first 15 Sep, 0 in ~200 words; 8 Sep had 3-4). Bar set on 15 Sep ('second clean timed piece = secure') met. | session 40 |
| 2026-09-15 | Developing → Developing | 15 Sep timed piece: 0 comma splices in ~200 words; her own 5-minute check reported 0 and 0 were found on verification. First clean timed piece (8 Sep had 3-4). Not the second instance yet. | session 26 |
| 2026-09-09 | Developing → Developing | Starter: identified 'The lights flickered, the music stopped' as a comma splice immediately. Mended a sentence fragment in her own text unprompted while re-laying the page. No promotion — the bar is catching splices in her own 5-minute check. | session 16 |
| 2026-09-08 | Not started → Developing | 3-4 comma splices in the timed piece 8 Sep ('You suddenly feel extremely tired, you collapse into the pile'; 'You look at the snake, it looks at you'). Rule named once; she then identified the join and fixed it to two sentences with a full stop, unprompted as to method. | session 13 |
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