| 2026-10-21 | Developing → Developing | paper #10 Q2: 2/4, loss=technique — identified the structural shift and its line but not the event at that moment | session 125 |
| 2026-10-07 | Developing → Developing | 7 Oct starter, cold, no notes: 'An anticlimax is when all the hype in the story is not worth it.' Build-up and let-down both present, 1/1 at first reply (25 Sep needed two tries and sharpening). Retrieval of the term only; no structure paragraph today. | session 82 |
| 2026-10-05 | Developing → Developing | 5 Oct: closed the 25 Sep paragraph, supported. Added sentence 1/1: 'The extract is from paragraph four, line 23-24 and it is the middle' - position exact (checked against the insert), moment not named in words, 'extract' used for 'quote'. Reader effect 1/1 on an abstract ask, no either/or: 'The reader feels disappointed and wanting a more exciting ending' (dictated). Stayed on order and expectation, 0 drift to word choice. About L2, supported; target L3 unaided. | session 74 |
| 2026-09-30 | Developing → Developing | Placement paper 30 Sep, structure question 2/8 (Level 1), unaided: opening focus named first (cottage), one change of focus (storm), effect generic ('keep the reader wanting to read on'); ending and footprints not named; 0 quotations; 3 sentences in 3 min. No status change from marking. | session 59 |
| 2026-09-25 | Gap → Developing | Correction (parent, 25 Sep): the 25 Sep audit reversion to gap misapplied the promotion rule — gap and notstarted share level 0, so session 47's notstarted → developing was one level, not two. Session 47 evidence stands: first structure paragraph with frames withdrawn, checklist only, 10-min timer, checklist 2/3, stayed on structure with no drift to word choice, ~L2; taught 23 Sep. Developing bar (taught + supported practice) met. | standalone |
| 2026-09-25 | Developing → Gap | audit: reverted developing → gap — session 47 (25 Sep) raised R3.1 two levels (notstarted → developing) in one session; only one status level may rise per session. Evidence (supported paragraph, checklist only, ~L2 vs target L3) meets the bar for gap; developing proposed pending confirmation next session. | standalone |
| 2026-09-25 | Not started → Developing | 25 Sep: first structure paragraph with frames withdrawn (0/3), typed, 10-min timer, checklist only. Checklist 2/3: quote given ('ran around the zebra in a circle'), why given (expected attack → nothing → anti-climax); moment not named in sentence 1 (opened with the quote). Stayed on order/expectation, 0 drift to word choice. ~L2 (target L3). Starter: 2/3 moments named cold, ending after one binary prompt; foreshadowing defined cold 1/1. | session 47 |
| 2026-09-23 | Not started → Not started | 23 Sep first teach, Life of Pi hyena extract, 2026 wording 'structured the text to create tension'. Under questioning 5/6 correct: camera on Pi remembering (binary), expects 'attack', found turning point line 21 'Nearly immediately it leapt', effect 'it builds up anticipation' (unprompted), ending: does not attack. Label foreshadowing unknown. Exit: unaided attempt Level 1 simple (no moment named, drifted to language); rebuilt with frames on 2 of 3 sentences. | session 42 |